13 Seconds Revised

Evalyn just knocked Sam flat 13 seconds into the fight—two hooks to the floating ribs, two more to the jaw. Can Sam get back up? If she can, will she? Evalyn’s hit her with more power than anyone she’s ever felt—and with almost contemptuous ease.

I wanted to try a different version of this pic; I’ve had a few suggestions regarding it. Is this one or the previous one better?

(And would you get up, if you were in Sam’s place?)